How vacuous. This needed some desperate editing and the the way the little kid acts drove me up a wall. How could anyone let their child act like that? The only shining point in this book was the main character's father. Other than that, I wish I had the time I spent reading this back. Definitely not going to be reading the next book... because really? Why is there another book?So, I didn't realize this was previously a fanfiction until after I read it, as I had not read it when it was an internet story, but now that I look back on it, it makes a lot of sense. Another person has lost my respect.